An old teacher of mine “Mr. Lester” who taught a writing class established a star list. We were never allowed to break any of rules established on the Star List. I thought this document was lost forever. But while cleaning out my old 3.5’ diskettes. I found it, I thought it would share it
1. do not use contractions they are informal
2.do not use the word there
3. do not use it
4 do not use first person (i me my we our)
5 do not use second person (you your)
6 do not use the words good,bad nice,really,very a lot,thing,anything
7. do not underline to emphasize
8. do not use slang
9.do not use abbreviations
10. do not use like as a comparison use such as
11. do not use absolutes such as always,forever,never
12. do not use upon
13.do not use people, or person
14.do not use the word different alone you must use different from
15 use between when speaking of 2. Use among when speaking ok 3 or more
16 do not use !!!!!!!!!
17 do not use due to use BECAUSE OF or AS A RESULT OF
18 no numbers to organize
19 do not refer to your own writing such as in this paper as i mentioned etc
20 do not use big little or interesting
21 do not use ONE as a person
22 do not use off of
23 do not use () ( )
24 do not use fun
25 do not use healthy use healthful
26 do not use situation or issue
27 do not use type of person
28 do not use centered around
29 do not use ::::::
30 do not ask questions
31 do not use "the reason and because in the same sentence
32 do not use the words in conclusion
33 never use extremely
34 do not use mad
35 do not write what something is not write what it IS
36 do not use many
37 do not use located
38 do not bring up a negative in a comparison or argument
39 do not use obvious simply state the fact if it is obvious
40 never assume anything the reader knows or believes
Awesome! Thanks. I was hoping someone would post this. I had Mr. Lester too and always remembered the star list. Class of 1991.
ReplyDeleteHi Chris, I was laughing when I read number 19, because it reminded me of how in class he would always say "do no refer, not the drug, to..." He was a good teacher.
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